Sunday, October 4, 2009
BROWNIES OUT OF THE OVEN ! ( fresh)
MMM the fantastic smell of fresh brownies coming out of the oven. My mom hands me a sweet chocolaty goodness it feels so warm. it looks so luscious. it tastes like chocolate from heaven ,i can feel it melt in my mouth. I can watch the icing slide down the side of the brownie, it looks so precious its hard not to eat it.
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This was a pretty good story, maybe a bit more decriptive words but it made me very hungry! I like the picture also. Good job
This made me hungry. I think you can still go even further. Look for even more detail, like the shine of the icing,the thickness of the batter. Even more on the smell.
Only one thing doesn't make sense. It tastes like chocolate, yet later you find it hard not to eat it... Cool picture.
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